Kuch is tarah se hai

This poem is inspired by an unmentioned reader. God has given everyone the right to love. And when everyone can love, why can’t a girl?

This poem is basically on the feelings that a girl has for someone, someone whom she doesn’t know, but feels an undefined bond for.

She wants to go and talk to him, wants to know his name, his birthday date. She wants to find meanings of their names and link them, but she can’t.

She can go and tell her friends she likes him, but the same thing she can’t go and say to him, because our current society and their mentality have never given a girl this right to go and tell someone that she likes him.

And even if she does, there is no assurity of how it will be taken. Many people think if she can come and say “I like you”, then she will be ready to do anything. But the same thing when a guy comes and says to a girl, it’s not taken in that way.

This poem defines the same feelings, where the girl can’t go and tell her feelings to that guy and she leaves everything to destiny, assuming this is a test of her patience, her love, and hopes that someday, he will come and say, “Hi”…

हर किसी से बयां कर सकती हू मे, 
मेरा इश्क़ तुझसे कुछ इस तरह से है...

बस एक तू ही है बेख़बर इस दासता से, 
मेरी मोहोबत की आज़माइश कुछ इस तरह से है...

नज़रों के सामने, जज़्बातों से बेखबर, 
हमारा नाता तुम से कुछ इस तरह से है...

इंतेज़ार की हद, मोहोबत को बया करने की गुज़ारिश, 
हाल-ए-दिल का सरफर कुछ इस तरह से है...

मेरी लकीरो में, तू है या नहीं, 
मेरी तकदीर की इम्तिहान, कुछ इस तरह से है...

- Deepika Janiyani

After knowing her story, I have now asked her to go ahead and say Hi to that guy. After all someone has to bring the change, and that’s the theme of this women’s day #BeBoldForChange.

So lets see how their story goes ahead. I am super exited to see a happy ending.

Since you are already here, please do leave your views on this poem in the comment section below.


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  1. Can’t read the Hindi script, but I so understand what you’re saying. It’s awful having to wait for the guy to propose and to be left hanging when you could just ask yourself and move on but no, no, it does not behove a girl, especially, an eastern girl.


  2. बताता है आइना मुझे कैसी बेरुखी से
    की मैं मरहूम होता जा रहा हूँ रौशनी से

    किसे इल्जाम दूँ मैं अपने बर्बाद होने का
    सारे फैसले किये मैंने खुद ही अपनी ख़ुशी से

    मुझे अब तक बहुत ख्वाईश थी खुद से गुफ़हतगु की
    मगर मैं छुपता फिर रहा हूँ अपने आप ही से

    हर लम्हा रहती है एक ताज़ा शिकायत
    कभी खुद से और कभी ज़िन्दगी से


  3. Beautiful lines, Incredible…
    Words failed me to say something in the appreciation of your skills set. Deepika you have been awarded by the God’s boon to understand the deepness of literature. keep it up…..


  4. मेरी लकीरो में, तू है या नहीं, मेरी तकदीर की इम्तिहान, कुछ इस तरह से है…, बहुत बहुत काबीले तारीफ़ .👍👍👍🤗🤗🤗


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