“तेरे मेरे दरमियाँ” is a poem on crush or should I say one sided love.
Each one of us falls in love at one time or the other. Some people are very lucky who get a chance to spend their whole life with their loved ones. On the other hand there are some persons who love someone a lot, but are never able to express their love in front of them due to any x, y, z reason.
This poetry is based on that kind of unsaid love and also leaves me with a question, that if unsaid love was so intense what would have happened if that love would have got it words.
ऐसी कौन सी मन्नत मांगो कि, मेरे दिल की अमावस ईद हो जाए, तू आए मेरे सामने और मेरे होठों से वो बात निकल जाए... कहने को तो लाखों शब्द होंगे, कह पाए तुम से, वो दिल की दासता तो कोई बात हो, होने को सब है पास मेरे, तू साथ हो तो कोई बात हो... जज़्बात मोहताज़ नहीं इस जमाने के रिवाजों के, ठहरे हुए है वो, इंतजार मे, तेरे अल्फाजों के... तेरा सामने होना, मेरे रूह को महका देता है, कुछ कहे बिना ही, सब कुछ बयां कर देता है... कभी झुकी पलकें भी कई सवाल पूछ लेती है, और तेरा मुस्कुराना, अनजाने में कोई पहेली सुलझा देता है... अरमान बन गये हो, तुम मेरे पहचान बन गये हो, खाव्हिशो की सुबह, ख्वाबों की शाम बन गये हो... बस अल्फाज़ो की ही कमी है तेरे मेरे दरमियाँ, कुछ ना हो के भी, सब कुछ है, तेरे मेरे दरमियाँ...- Deepika Janiyani
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Welcome 😊
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बताता है आइना मुझे कैसी बेरुखी से
की मैं मरहूम होता जा रहा हूँ रौशनी से
किसे इल्जाम दूँ मैं अपने बर्बाद होने का
सारे फैसले किये मैंने खुद ही अपनी ख़ुशी से
मुझे अब तक बहुत ख्वाईश थी खुद से गुफ़हतगु की
मगर मैं छुपता फिर रहा हूँ अपने आप ही से
हर लम्हा रहती है एक ताज़ा शिकायत
कभी खुद से और कभी ज़िन्दगी से
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Lovely
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बहुत खूब
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Thanks 🙂
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As usual amazing article …. really fantastic …. Thanks for sharing this!! 🙂 🙂
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Thanks 🙂
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जज़्बातो को शब्दों में पिरोना कोई सीखे तो तुमसे….. किसी को अपनी प्रेरणा बनना कोई सीखे तो तुमसे…
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Thanks dear ❤
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बहुत खूब
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Ji शुक्रिया…
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Amazing Poem Deep.. I’ve no words ‘kya taarif karun aapki’… I just love your poem…
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Thanks dear 🙂
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This is simply the best poem I’ve ever read…
The very first verse itself won my heart and your emotions can clearly be felt throughout.
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Thanks dear 🙂
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Hmmm Deepika beautiful poem and so much depth in it, and yes that is life where there r people who r made for each other and others r like how u have described. That is life friend.👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thanks 🙂 yes that’s life…
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Bhut ache !
Mgr ek baat puchna chahunga ap Jo ye Hindi poetry wala container kaha SE lgate ho ?
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Ji Shukriya.
Vo poem ka container nhi hai, uske kisie bhi chiz ke liye use kar sakte hai, uske liye code hai. Code yaha dikhega nhi, islye niche image dal rahi hu.
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Beautiful one..❤
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Thanks Shweta ji
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Yor welcome..
Wht this link is about??
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Which link?
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बहुत ही अच्छा लिखा आपने.
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Thanks Sachin
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Well written
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Thanks 🙂
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Very beautiful !!!
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Thanks Roshni ji
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Your welcome ☺
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शानदार 👍💐💐💐
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Shukriya Ajay ji
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Bahut hi achha likha h aapne…
Sabdo k rachna ki kala apke pas adbhut h…
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Thanks Nagesh ji.
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बहुत ही अच्छी रचना ।
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शुक्रिया Abhay ji
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Well written and well pronounced..
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Thanks Sachin ji.
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🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙇🙇🙇🙇
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👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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